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    dots Submission Name: Ready for the wolvesdots
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    Author: Linzi
    ASL Info:    24.f.wales
    Elite Ratio:    5.91 - 80/100/94
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsReady for the wolvesdots
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    All that's left Is the grits of my past,
    eroded by the tide of anxiety.
    Swallowed back like salt-crystals
    shrivelling my insides.
    What a tasty meal i'll make.
    All seasoned and hollowed out,
    pink flesh ripe with goosebumps.
    Ready for the wolves.




    Submitted on 2015-08-10 10:16:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      God, yes. Now this is what I call angst!
    Loved the imagery, the detail to what the writer's feeling and their intentions at hand - all in such a short verse, as well! Kudos for using your words both wisely & appealingly, no matter how distasteful the concept may be.
    | Posted on 2015-08-19 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmm depending upon how you mean that. I'd say nay. Personally, do have relative anxiety, but generally have a way around it. I'd be careful with those wolves though. Be safe.
    | Posted on 2015-08-10 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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