Ready for the wolves

Author: Linzi ASL Info:    24.f.wales Elite Ratio:    5.91 - 80 /100 /94 Words: 43

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Ready for the wolves

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All that's left Is the grits of my past, eroded by the tide of anxiety. Swallowed back like salt-crystals shrivelling my insides. What a tasty meal i'll make. All seasoned and hollowed out, pink flesh ripe with goosebumps. Ready for the wolves.

Submitted on 2015-08-10 10:16:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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God, yes. Now this is what I call angst! Loved the imagery, the detail to what the writer's feeling and their intentions at hand - all in such a short verse, as well! Kudos for using your words both wisely & appealingly, no matter how distasteful the concept may be.

| Posted on 2015-08-19 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

Hmm depending upon how you mean that. I'd say nay. Personally, do have relative anxiety, but generally have a way around it. I'd be careful with those wolves though. Be safe.

| Posted on 2015-08-10 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]

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