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    dots Submission Name: Sonnet: Petrichor and the Gravediggerdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 75/182/217
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsSonnet: Petrichor and the Gravediggerdots
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    A whisper of rain---arouse suspicion;
    shovel into the dark---deep oubliette.
    Drowning the Earth with unclaimed ambition,
    memories; a forgotten---Juliet.

    A scream of thunder---ignite subconscious;
    buried them beneath our vitriolic
    reflection of a monster---Atrocious,
    human condition is melancholic.

    A cry of silence---speaking acerbic:
    Everything deserves to die---truth trenchant
    response to the heartless; dead majestic.
    Wasting away is---our only penchant.

    Write tragedy on stone---oh gravedigger,
    telling tales of our mourning petrichor.




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      I'm in love with each and every individual reference, specifically the third verse am I utterly fond of - the rest, to me, is just filler to the overall premise.
    | Posted on 2015-08-19 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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