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    dots Submission Name: Fruition dots

    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/176
    Words: 352
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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    dotsFruition dots

    Because we only have now
    Now is the reality
    And to get caught up in a dream like state,
    Well it's unhealthy.
    Drowning , draining, and
    Constantly changing.
    A life of continually

    Get lost in the journey.
    Bust the lock
    Of hearts chained by past
    Famed dames who stole the dimes
    From your eyes because shinny
    Objects objectify the plays.


    And silence makes to listen
    The whispers of the wind
    Conversations between the crickets
    Thunder in the distance
    Warning us all of its fruition.

    Fruition of sparks that
    Unlocked the hearts
    From past promised
    Talks while parked.

    In lots we never knew
    Who hold so true the
    Clues to continue.

    How old were we suppose to be
    Before we were too old to be unmarried?
    And why did we have to come back
    For each other when the ingredients
    were already made?

    How could we have both been so meek?
    Because we believed in time machines.
    my flux compassitor is rusty
    It stopped spinning
    it's been a century.
    Forgive me.

    I was distracted by
    the symbolism
    Of the illuminati.
    'Cause the new world order
    Gonna rise and fall,
    The whole damn world
    gonna rise and fall.'

    But, that all said
    You are still that same person
    I don't care what you think
    And so am I.

    Because if not,
    Then how else are we capable of laughing at the same jokes
    And remembering the same
    Lamey Lamerson

    I thought you said that if I was near
    You would let me say anything.
    Am I mistaken?

    Some things are worth dying for
    The little things are worth longing for
    Mindful things are worth waking up for
    Love is worth living for
    If you feel this way then
    These things are worth fighting for.
    What a word.

    Worth while to come to fruition

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      this is kind-dove set-sea if you ask me.
    | Posted on 2015-08-16 00:00:00 | by ShyOne | [ Reply to This ]

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