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    dots Submission Name: Winter's Evedots
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    Author: closetpoet
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    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWinter's Evedots
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    birthed into illumination;
    bathed in moonlight, full

    drenched in winter’s midnight silence
    broken only by the claps of naked trees

    dancing to melodic glacial breeze.
    crisp air drawn into unsuspecting lungs

    drawn once, then deeper, and again, deeper still. greedily held.
    If only but a moment . savoring the taste of oak logs burning somewhere near.

    Finally expelled; obliged to warm huddled hands
    swirling breath suspended

    absent minded to the world around,
    awkward feet break crystal footprint molds

    held in fields of frozen fescue stalagmites. glistening,
    mirroring a celestial canopy

    I dare not speak and break this moment
    who would gather up the shards of shattered winter’s silence




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