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    Author: Pollens
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 4/27/34
    Words: 275
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    The fear-for-me
    is not in the supposing,
    that the being of me
    should grind down
    to the ho-hum
    of a tile-done floor
    and the spaciousness
    of the room







    that i should
    conceive of a vessel
                                  of like size.


                             of



    an
    innocuous liquid
    of like weight.









    Precise
    unforgiving
    in containing

    [it transpires]

    a capitulation
    i do and do not
    have the heart to articulate.


































                                                                          ii.



                                                 fear of the object.
                                                      the screams of eagles swallowing eagles

























    iii.






    Coke.




    i am somewhere
    between
    shaken
                   and flat.

































    iv.

    Can there be any question of eternity?
    I live in these two worlds:
    what may heart says
    but i do not.




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