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    dots Submission Name: Aforesaid Now Apologeticallydots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 288/229/264
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsAforesaid Now Apologeticallydots
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    A body I find no connection to
    With every knock at my front door
    Tremble, uneasy
    Panic transpired by a familiar lore

    And his eyes that seek
    The lights shut off, but still he meets
    My perceptual compromise
    At his force, my window sill rise
    And from the breeze thereafter, my red eyes dry
    With apathy, I look out
    Unbeknownst, he look in
    I never wanted it to come to this.

    What he expects from me stems from the outter-regions of what should have been
    - the day to me -
    Could not have and would only be
    Where I am not.

    Sum to the left and grieve the negative absence of it

    My way of being, far before a cozened guise
    What I know is naught
    And for that, I apologize.




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