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    dots Submission Name: Beastdots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBeastdots
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    What beast lies within,
    this ostensible, civilized skin,
    that rages night and day
    a chameleon adaptation
    presenting talons, to suit
    an unnatural world

    Hardwired for morality
    adventitious ability
    to feast on it's own, grows
    learning to ravage
    exploiting the weak;
    the marginal

    Armed with rationalization;
    taking without thought of flock
    self preservation, promoting
    a perpetual hunger for self fulfillment
    removed, only by years,
    from Cretaceous, primal thirst

    Idolizing some
    cheering their carnage
    for our own inadequacies
    and sense of entitled revenge
    vicariously empowering feeble complacency
    usurping, decency




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