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Chemical Romance


Author: ShadowParadox
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Class/Type: Misc /Love
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Chemical Romance



Your love is like...

Helium-

It changed the

Voice-

Of my heart




Submitted on 2015-08-24 23:59:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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