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    dots Submission Name: Chemical Romancedots
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    Author: ShadowParadox
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 23/66/34
    Words: 20
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsChemical Romancedots
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    Your love is like...

    Helium-

    It changed the

    Voice-

    Of my heart




    Submitted on 2015-08-24 23:59:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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