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Chemical Romance
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ShadowParadox
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Chemical Romance
Your love is like...
Helium-
It changed the
Voice-
Of my heart
Submitted on 2015-08-24 23:59:58
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...-The Black Parade plays in the background-
| Posted on 2015-08-25 00:00:00 | by
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2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?
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