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    Author: Damien Vladimir
    ASL Info:    28/m/hollywood/Ca
    Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 122/89/35
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    How long has it been?
    How long since the paper's felt my ink
    Way to long one must think
    Yet these morbid thoughts won't sink
    Fuck!
    Somebody give me a hint!




    Submitted on 2015-08-27 05:53:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I tie you to a chair and torture you until you write.
    | Posted on 2015-09-17 00:00:00 | by Torie | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh yea. I'm certain you nailed this piece. Just keep trying. You ate your hardest critic. The words will come they always do. I think personally it is much about stimulation, do you write from your heart and emotions? Experiences? Observations? Your muse is waiting for you to pay attention to her.
    | Posted on 2015-08-27 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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