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    dots Submission Name: This is Compassiondots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 315
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Thoughts, relations.


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    I have been empowered by the strength of faith
    Yet I am surrounded by arrows that are targeted at my doubt
    I know I will never lose my footing on the foundation that has been laid before me
    Yet,



    There are so many people who do not live this way
    There are brothers and sisters who rely on their self validated efforts to control their personal space
    When circumstance and emotion speak so loudly to them they call to me
    Lovely hearts and lives shadowed by open wounds
    They play like film on a reel before me

    What can I say?

    How can I comfort someone who has no hope.
    How can I restore hope.
    Show you a windowsill filled with morning dew just to show you sometimes its chilly out here and wet and uncomfortable but this newness is still new mercy every morning

    How can you see it if you close your eyes every time you are afraid, if you sleep through your aching body

    I whisper

    I sing songs around you and hum Melodies that are of divinity

    I testify

    My own life speaking for the struggle and the silver linings that grow brighter every day

    My brothers and my sisters, love has you in her heart but what you are searching for with your meloncholy fingertips, turning pages to stories that you want read aloud about you on how hard you tried, how rough the road you have taken, how beautiful you are when you walk it

    I can't say you aren't beautiful
    My heart longs for you like you were any lover I have ever known
    My desires are just as questioning as if my love were not reciprocated
    With the question itself being of faith and if mine is enough to carry you to the next morning




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      With the question itself being of faith and if mine is enough to carry you to the next morning

    That is a heavy burden.
    How do we carry those who are too weak
    too tired
    too frail of heart?

    How do you hold up someone who refuses to hold up themselves?

    With love.

    With forgivness.

    With mercy.

    And yes, compassion.


    Or we will fail. We will need to be carried. Which teaches another lesson entirely.


    Nice work here.

    -Jane
    | Posted on 2015-09-13 00:00:00 | by JanePlane | [ Reply to This ]
      Aww.
    Are you the "shoulder to cry on" for your friends and family?
    Perhaps people come to you for your advise during times of hardships. You, so understanding and compassionate to others problems. You express concern on many levels to a variety of issues so this speaks to so many.well written and we'll expressed.i really like it. ;)
    | Posted on 2015-08-28 00:00:00 | by Damien Vladimir | [ Reply to This ]


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