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ALWAYS FAR


Author: jermwerm
ASL Info:    26/m/FRESNO CA
Elite Ratio:    4.29 - 203 /268 /83
Words: 45
Class/Type: Deep Thought /Friendship
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realizing how much you really love someone and being love around them only after their gone.


ALWAYS FAR



Why is it that the ones you fall for are always far to beautiful for you to reach, knowing that it's to late, your life seems to slowly fall apart with regret of not just letting them know how you really were starting to feel?




Submitted on 2015-08-27 10:22:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  The advertisements tell me, "You deserve it", but I tell them, "It is too good for me".

And it is too good for me and I don't deserve it but I eat it like coconut ice-cream, leaving a smudge on my nose and chin.
| Posted on 2015-08-30 00:00:00 | by Torie | [ Reply to This ]
  Because the beautiful tragedy of life is knowing that when you miss an opportunity it will never come again, and yet new choices exist in every moment.

Do it anyway.
| Posted on 2015-08-30 00:00:00 | by lucianraven | [ Reply to This ]


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