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    Author: Pollens
    Elite Ratio:    1.04 - 4/27/34
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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                                       I crushed an ant once
                                  Watched him

                                  Scanning the frequencies



                                            Which segment
                                       for life?


                                  infinite /
                                            robotic
    .







                                  Now i know
                                  how he
                                  feels,


                                  the world has its foot
                                  on my spine.






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