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    dots Submission Name: Twin Flamedots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/174
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 625
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       Ehhhhhh, it could be way more dynamic given the complexities of a true twin flame. A work in progress.


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    dotsTwin Flamedots
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    twin flames,
    love that
    ignites endlessly
    everywhere
    beyond the galaxies.

    Universally
    Intertwined by the same fibers
    You and I.

    Substance with guidance
    Oh what a glorious
    sun dance.

    Tried and prudent
    Tests and movement
    Pushing against the common
    Notions.

    Revolve
    To conclusion
    Decide
    Your illusions

    Impact and take stance
    Agree and make plans
    To start this
    Revolution!

    Our Hearts are connected
    Unlocked and projected.



















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    ||| Comments |||
      However very mundane.
    | Posted on 2015-09-17 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      However though,
    it is a paradox as of the moment,
    something I can distinguish,
    but the flame grows to quickly,
    and I must put it out
    before it gets too big.

    If the world were my laboratory,
    lovely as it seems,
    I might make the wrong concoction,
    and then what would there be?

    Here i am know out of science,
    for this blasphemy above,
    with not a single God below me
    For they all were damned above.
    (uhh fictional response fun.)
    | Posted on 2015-09-15 00:00:00 | by ShyOne | [ Reply to This ]
      That's a hard one, for sure.
    | Posted on 2015-09-13 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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