Yup. I like the synchronatic feeling of this piece and I definitely agree with these connections being, well connected. Waves of consciousness traveling through many different mediums. Nice write.
This has a very trippy feel to it. Part of its charm is the almost erratic nature of the piece. As I read it I couldn't help but hear Hendrix's 'Manic Depression". It is not so much that the piece is depressed, as it is insane. What I mean by that is the fact that many today try to find themselves in these pop quiz FaceBook test. Or for that matter, in the stars, the cookie and or sexual relations. I think you deftly and with great satire deal with the nonsense of trivial fulfillment. You recognize that to be truly fulfilled one must be so on hearty stuff.
The only nit I have is the ending. "we will be" is quite limp compared to the driving power of the piece. I like how you tie in the foretelling aspect of the piece, but I know you can do it in a stronger way.
Submission Name: Psychic Connection
