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    dots Submission Name: Quickwater (2)dots
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    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 40/64/74
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsQuickwater (2)dots
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    I'm taking a moments rest
    somehow I'm all drenched

    I'm feelin' like a frozen pond,
    and i've fallen into my own depths

    the sting of it continues to falls over me

    as I breath it in, its all cold
    like the wind, taking all of me
    convulsing, and freezing inside of me

    when I finally exhale
    it takes a little bit
    of my words
    and off they go

    to where the sky
    accumulates the sound
    of each hail
    by increasing its volume

    without warning
    my eyes that have no master
    lead me astray,

    plotting each percussion
    my heart beat faster
    as I realized

    they let me be toppled
    by the cold hail, and cold water

    they never saw me through
    the bubbles

    goose bumps become my texture
    my vision builds up an unpalatable salt

    I watch from a distance
    as I fall with gravity
    and evaporate before
    I hit the cold water.

    I finally decide
    that there's no substance
    to what i'm trying to say




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      What a lovely vapour.

    We enter your vapour and follow it until it disappears in the cold water - your breath on the winter air.

    But as you say, your breath has no substance. Of course not, it is life itself, the word made flesh, and contains every substance there is or will be - but betrayed. A Judas with every breath - betrayal with every kiss, and each breath a hanging.

    | Posted on 2015-09-17 00:00:00 | by Torie | [ Reply to This ]
      Love your goose bumps as your texture....
    | Posted on 2015-09-02 00:00:00 | by Chelebel | [ Reply to This ]


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