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    dots Submission Name: Ancestor dots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 308
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I am traveling,
    On foot
    I take one step at a time

    Before me there is an endlessness
    Save the horizon
    And yet past my vision I know infinity lives

    Above me is the blue sky, and the space beyond that, and the space beyond that

    Behind me physically it is just as endless as the way in going
    Yet, some where near where I was born, where my mother was born, where things began
    I realize that it took something to give us breath


    masked as a melody I hear the wind rustling, birds singing, pitter patters of different sorts I cannot define

    When I opened my eyes this morning I didn't know where I was going
    Or that I would need to know along the way

    I didn't know that i would hear the call that begins somewhere inside my chest
    The sound of my heart beating matches the mysterious series of sounds that are all around me
    Like my insides know the outside is kin

    Maybe this explains why every man I meet is a brother or an uncle
    An opportunity to see if I can help prevent mistakes I have learned along the way

    Somehow the death I have seen produced the idea of life in me

    When I know that I know we are all family
    I am a generation ago and
    I can save my own heart from the pain I've seen
    And maybe make room for myself to care about other things
    And as i keep going this way the sun begins to rise over these thoughts
    And warm them
    The infinite dimensions in infinite directions begin to welcome me, smile at me, make themselves known to me
    The secrets of life make life
    And cannot be contained




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      Days long ago, when we were in Egypt
    She was a woman and I was a Man,
    There was something about sand,
    but this most that we would understand.

    They called me Ra, bfor they created that God,
    They called me human in Egyptian, before human meant flaw.
    The falser gods wouldn't listen, we wanted lots of smaller pyramids,
    they would have kept cool, we would have been protected.

    They thought they were god though, and we didn't know we were gods children.

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    | Posted on 2015-09-15 00:00:00 | by ShyOne | [ Reply to This ]
      Indeed the mysteries of life are a myriad and diversely multifarious phantasmagoria that human complexity has an innate affinity for. "Like my insides know the outside is kin", some people never realize this of objectives manifest. An astute observation my friend.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2015-09-04 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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