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    dots Submission Name: A Pose I Supposedots
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    Author: SavedDragon
    Elite Ratio:    3.61 - 303/258/83
    Words: 225
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
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    dotsA Pose I Supposedots
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    I pose to propose a time of inevitable pain
    I compose words slain in disdain,
    Throbs hard like blood through my veins

    I suppose I can dispose
    The truth disclosed
    From my brain
    Leaves conscious to reality
    But not in vain

    As it slips from her finger tips
    She takes a sip from her drink
    To think twice
    Quick enough before it's time to blink

    She sinks deep into oblivion
    Like drains from a sink
    Falls in, swirls in
    Curls into the fetal position
    In her shallow disposition

    Once more she opens the door behind her
    But collapses down to the floor
    Flames out, burnt out
    Her weakness fills her with doubt

    Like a warrior, nothing worries her
    She fights battles uphill
    Aims to kill
    In her pursuit
    To encompass courage and will

    Divine, like when she dies
    She opens her eyes
    Energies consume her
    She's alive
    Can send chills up your spine

    Grains of sand in the Hands
    And sands of time
    Passes through her, she's a Pursuer
    In her attempts to rhythm and rhyme

    I pinch my wrist, slip my disk
    To see if I still exist
    In a world so cold and dark
    I embark in journeys untold
    And aim to discern my purpose
    In this life I hold




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