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    Author: hyproglo
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    Seven miles down a tangent
    And heck
    who was there?

    No one is looking

    Dust in the wheel wells
    Gunshot residue on the wrists

    Seven miles down a tangent

    Away from the tornado of souls

    The mountain looks insurmountable when I am the pillar on the top


    And let your statues represent me
    I'll kindly smile and float to the sea

    Heaven
    Will
    Call
    Me
    When
    My
    Skills
    Are
    Needed

    Whether I am on the road
    Or seven miles down a tangent

    Who breaks who in a canyon?

    She wished I jumped in the river while she stood on the shore...shining sea shells and nothing more.

    Somewhere a clock strikes twelve and Jesus cleaned another wound

    Two blocks away a cleansing never happened

    No damnation followed
    No salvation sent
    Twelve o'clock just showed up
    and then it went

    In peace






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