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    dots Submission Name: My daddys armsdots

    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMy daddys armsdots

    My daddy's arms
    From the perspective of six months life
    As he buries his head in the pillow and I
    Work myself to rolling over in his direction
    My smiles as I
    Look up for long moments
    At fragments if limbs

    What must he think of ink on skin
    He studies so intently
    And I wonder how these patterns and shapes will serve him down the road
    Unknown to him for mysterious reasons he will probably love biomechanics and goosebump letters
    He may prefer black and white to colorful displays
    His delighted shrieks of pleasure do please
    Even sleepy subjects

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      Awww! Poetry from such an every day, almost trivial moment. What are they thinking when they look at our tattoos, what impression will it leave on them as they go through life? I love it.
    | Posted on 2016-01-01 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]

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