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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMomentsdots
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    There are moments.
    moments that are made;
    that are betrayed;
    some we overlook;
    others, taken for granted
    and some we live in

    there are those we look back on;
    moments that define us
    and some,
    when all we are is consumed
    while others
    that are left fallow, eventually fertile
    allowed to learn and grow from

    certain moments go against all we know
    yet we press on
    thinking maybe this is our one
    final hour, aching for
    just one more,
    moment.




    Submitted on 2015-09-10 02:17:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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