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    dots Submission Name: i can heal u shorty in a million waysdots
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    Author: EshyFishy
    ASL Info:    21yo mess having crises
    Elite Ratio:    6.92 - 126/123/57
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Cheesy Joke/Happy
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    dotsi can heal u shorty in a million waysdots
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    a cold trail of flight echoes behind your broke, seated ass;
    //
    time and time again you leave me




    Submitted on 2015-09-12 02:43:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hmm if one person or two needed healed a shortly a million times it seems more likely they are sick by ownly one way. perhaps love-sick. perhaps they need pills that aren't words. Perhaps they need hugged. Perhaps they need hope. Most likely they need validation.
    | Posted on 2015-09-15 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]
      This seems to convey dejection rather than gaiety. I have been the one sitting down.... and what appears to trigger this kind of attachments is sheer fear of not being loved/liked again or, perhaps just being used to this person, as well being afriad of loneliness from both sides …. I suppose …

    I have recently learned that one can't be with someone just out of mere love. There are issues other than love or perhaps connected to it that keep people apart. It's kind of hard to explain....


    Kind regards,

    Ethan
    | Posted on 2015-09-13 00:00:00 | by Ethan Brody | [ Reply to This ]
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    | Posted on 2015-09-12 00:00:00 | by EshyFishy | [ Reply to This ]


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