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open volume mixer: profound sadness

Author: EshyFishy
ASL Info:    21yo mess having crises
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// 2003 //

open volume mixer: profound sadness

a forehead of itchy skin
nails too long to type
100 tabs open, alt-comedy

spread your fingers apart ever so slightly
hold them still, keep them aloof in that perfectly
unplanned hipstery fashion

you want to be a delicate flower, dressed up in
gossamer dresses, but your body is too

if you hit enter in the middle of a
you too can make poetry

scratch the inner corner of your eye and scrape out the remnants of last night's makeup, this is who you are, and who you ever will be.

Submitted on 2015-09-12 03:11:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ugh. this one is fairly profound. HIPstirrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Smile for the while cuz it only gets benile if you pile just for styill
| Posted on 2015-09-15 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]

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