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    dots Submission Name: open volume mixer: profound sadnessdots
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    Author: EshyFishy
    ASL Info:    21yo mess having crises
    Elite Ratio:    6.92 - 126/123/57
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Cheesy Joke/
    Total Views: 718
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 614



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    dotsopen volume mixer: profound sadnessdots
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    a forehead of itchy skin
    nails too long to type
    100 tabs open, alt-comedy

    spread your fingers apart ever so slightly
    hold them still, keep them aloof in that perfectly
    unplanned hipstery fashion

    you want to be a delicate flower, dressed up in
    gossamer dresses, but your body is too
    solid

    if you hit enter in the middle of a
    sentence
    you too can make poetry

    scratch the inner corner of your eye and scrape out the remnants of last night's makeup, this is who you are, and who you ever will be.




    Submitted on 2015-09-12 03:11:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ugh. this one is fairly profound. HIPstirrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
    Smile for the while cuz it only gets benile if you pile just for styill
    | Posted on 2015-09-15 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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