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    Author: EshyFishy
    ASL Info:    21yo mess having crises
    Elite Ratio:    6.92 - 126/123/57
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Misc/Happy
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    dreams are morbid reminders in my unconsciousness of the things that feed my guilt
    reminders of the things i need to do to further fuel my daily anxiety
    remind me that the supposed love i harbour is festering away into voids of no communication
    displaying distortions of my reality and desires


    you were living next door to me, but we were still fighting
    you didn't want to see me, in my dream
    it made me realise how much i want to see you, in real life

    and yet there you go, your transient life goes on, and you are further away from me. one day i will forget what it is like to feel your hands wrapped around my tiny prominent knuckles. my skin will forget your embrace, but my head will not forget to love you.

    ///get fucked you sappy fuck///




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      Hmm Es is basically a transient life for us all. Losing love hurts though. I've been here.
    | Posted on 2015-09-15 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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