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    dots Submission Name: Souldots
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    Author: Ra
    Elite Ratio:    5.21 - 2/1/1
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsSouldots
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    Soul is not a system,
    Soul does not decide,
    Soul might live within you,
    but even Souls can die,
    Gods are not immortal,
    Gods have never lived,
    But Gods can never die,
    for love can still exist,
    Heaven IS the virtue,
    hell was just the price,
    The pyramids were systems,
    the Cats were but device,
    There's a safety in a number,
    but we on past the sky,
    and if passed you there a ladder,
    then you ask if you can climb,
    and if never there an answer,
    then that answers up to you,
    for the Gods may always listen,
    but not need to hear from you,
    So if love is but poison,
    then it's evil, have no doubt,
    but then love was never love,
    you should know this all by now,
    so for every spinning fractal,
    lace a love song inside out,
    for if love is Heavens Virtue,
    then you've figured past the clouds.




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      How soever are you sorrowed?
    That in Aphrodite time,
    There were many male the martyr,
    and so many more the swine?
    | Posted on 2015-09-16 00:00:00 | by ShyOne | [ Reply to This ]


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