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    dots Submission Name: Trash Animalsdots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/142
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsTrash Animalsdots
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    Crow always screaming,
    Fox grinning and scheming .
    Black bird in the hen house.
    Red dog pulling a nest to the ground.
    Black beak yelling filth,
    keen eyes watching the weak,
    sleek wings seeking the dead.
    Trash fills the fox's head.
    White and red finds the critter where it lays.
    The crow already has its eyes.
    Trash bird and trash dog,
    live off the dying, wounded and dead.




    Submitted on 2015-09-16 23:05:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Animals have emotions, but unlike ourselves, animals are not conscious of being conscious.

    Yesterday I watched a beautiful Black Bird eat another bird. And how the other birds hate the Black Bird and dive bomb the Black Bird and harry him.

    The animals know not what they do, while we see ourselves in the animals, we see the animals as a reflection of ourselves. This is not fair on the animals.
    | Posted on 2015-09-22 00:00:00 | by Torie | [ Reply to This ]


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