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    dots Submission Name: Phthisisdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/211
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsPhthisisdots
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    Inter suspicions of a belief in swallowing Earth,
    contemptuous with utter devotion;
    a slave to what once was.
    Swirling dark ocean,
    of phthisis
    in pain;
    sick.
    End days
    of phthisis,
    absence crawling back;
    a slave to what once was.
    Maliciousness with that purpose to
    enter punishment in an afterlife that forgot Earth.




    Submitted on 2015-09-21 20:09:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Your writing's selfless.
    | Posted on 2015-09-23 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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