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    dots Submission Name: I Am A Salesmandots

    Author: BenCollier
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 425/386/88
    Words: 652
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       A Crown of Sonnets in Iambic Pentameter

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    dotsI Am A Salesmandots

    As negative my profession appears
    To strengthen that thought by action not shown
    A basic human desire my peers
    For their perceived intentions still unknown
    That which unfair bestowed in ridicule
    Make available time, service the same
    To serve or toil, and make trust my own tool
    Reality focuses on ends game
    I am not just trying to make a sale
    Nor get you in spending over your means
    A friend, partner, nemesis curtailed
    Champion of fair, I make trust convene
    Controversial subjects unfruitful
    I strive to keep conversations neutral

    I strive to keep conversation neutral
    For your view of me remain personal
    To decline respectively in plural
    Does speak and not engage my arsenal
    Sees a sullen thought from a threadbare sight
    My voice sounds the timbre of heavens wealth
    Engage the thought, enhance the word, just right
    Remove hesitation, accept the stealth
    I may be thought unfriendly or unkind
    Provide generic response as though
    A fear or refusal to speak my mind
    When the silence pours like a fine Bordeaux
    For what I am cause my actions to sing
    To everybody I am everything
    To everybody I am everything
    Counselor, designer, expert and guide
    A heart to serve, for all must I fore bring
    Accepted by all as none are denied
    As seen in nature an element pure
    Reliable as O positive blood
    Cause my works to coalesce and are sure
    Respond to all like your very best budd
    Called upon by minion and mentor
    Relied upon by vendor and merchant
    Display my empathy as augmenter
    Not for pride but my in service penchant
    Understands want of saintly provision
    Will not change facts or coerce decisions

    Will not change facts or coerce decisions
    The products shown are not for my ego
    Nor increase perception of my vision
    When designing someone’s Winnebago
    Not seeking pleasure providing in fact
    The warranties and care and options for
    The color the shape and things that detract
    From the picture that paints what you adore
    You have a thought of how something should be
    My quota is not for you to concern
    The details and proper complexity
    Information is for you to discern
    I am sincere and I will not pretend
    With you at ease consider me your friend.

    With you at ease consider me your friend
    A confidant of unique adventure
    Commiserate and not superintend
    Will work with you and support this venture
    My words will enhance and maybe refine
    Their intent designed for information
    Put into form in hope helps you align
    Your project’s final transfiguration
    I will offer you honestly knowledge
    From an informational perspective
    Without need of thanks or your acknowledge
    We work together a great collective
    Most sincerely I hope I can equip
    To be of service, and my stewardship

    To be of service, and my stewardship
    Will swear my allegiance my words to lead
    A trustworthy passage, a quick round trip
    To re-seek my counsel and fill your need
    Confidence in me to tell another
    Words describe relayed to your family
    Please trust me with your mother or brother
    Enthusiastically not warily
    My service betters, it ripens with age
    Experience has refined, taught me well
    Offer a gentle word, do not upstage
    Suggestions only, never to just sell
    Politeness is important, honesty too
    Always say please and be sure to thank you

    Always say please and be sure to thank you
    Ask permission to act on your behalf
    Offer different perspective in lieu
    Show feigned agreement, a lockstep gaffe
    Desire to please leave a good thought
    Exceed expectations and good deeds
    Never to worry if mistakes are wrought
    Your complete confidence as friend proceeds
    Of my best habits and your fragile trust
    In relaying quickly my gratitude
    Honestly, sincerely be sure I must
    My graciousness is not a platitude
    Stereotype, that is others arrears
    As negative as my profession appears

    Submitted on 2015-09-22 14:47:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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