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    dots Submission Name: Contradicted Me || part 26dots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
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    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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    dotsContradicted Me || part 26dots
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    One there,
    that is a question on my mind;
    one belonging to a dual kind...

    The inexplicable purpose of existence
    How
    no matter where one may stand
    those who do not know, abide

    By what standards do we live?
    Fabricated by the wanting of a life
    rather than the now for which we could even die.




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