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    dots Submission Name: The Blood moon and the sea 2015dots

    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.07 - 48/165/170
    Words: 429
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       This is a walk at the beach one night after the lunar eclipse, blood moon, and mercury in retro grade. This is my attempt to capture what I saw in the ocean, the effects I felt and then my description as best as possible in words.

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    dotsThe Blood moon and the sea 2015dots

    Blood moon upon us
    Like it or not.
    Mercury in retro grade
    Tides bash away
    at the
    ever withering
    Sandy shore.

    Watching the frantic waves
    Keeping up with the
    Ever changing constant
    from the moon.

    Tugging and pulling
    An extraordinary amount of force
    With each embrace upon the shoreline
    The water caresses

    Embrace the sea
    Meeting the feet
    With intense crashing
    And running races
    of two sides of the wave
    Rushing towards each other

    Undertow must know
    Where to go
    once it has
    Made its
    to the pathway.

    70 feet pulled out
    The puddles shallow and few
    30 feet from the rest of the action
    Out in the distance
    fine lines
    Create the
    Grey, black, navy

    Ships at sea
    Probably fishing
    Thrashing back and forth
    With each push and pull
    of the sea

    Orange refractions
    lunar eclipse
    Action on
    Sept 28
    Just one day later
    The tides

    Special stuff.
    Once in a lifetime
    Maybe twice if you are

    Walking in the water
    Losing sense of being
    The earth feels like
    it's spinning
    Beneath my feet
    Angular velocity.

    Third eye opening
    To possibilities of

    Realizing deeper
    with each other

    Understanding more of
    Self loathing
    Moving away from
    Pushing forward
    into the light
    Into The love.

    Moving forward into the future
    Aware of the now
    Loving and living In
    The moment
    Following our hearts
    Instead of our minds.

    Allowing the feeling to guide us
    Instead of pharmaceuticals blocking our
    Abilities to coexist properly
    In our environments.

    Allowing the anxiety to work its way through it
    Calm the mind while under going this.
    Take that birds eye view
    So you don't have to review
    Your own behaviors
    Or keep feeding the need of
    To dig deep inside yourself
    All the while, removing your very own leach
    That's imaginary!

    Don't spoil the seed
    Don't let it.
    The mind is our fruit.

    Just like the sands love affair
    With the sea.
    Just like the ever constant need
    To feel free.

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    | Posted on 2015-10-05 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Like an "Off and On" switch?

    Very demonic, like 9-6 feet under you!
    | Posted on 2015-10-05 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

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