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    Author: closetpoet
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    Words: 109
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    dotsWhydots
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    Why do the things that we do
    what makes us hide behind the masks,
    we take a lifetime to create,
    only to reach an epiphany past the point of no return

    why do we try so hard
    to please people that mean nothing,
    yet take for granted all those souls
    whose love was sowed into this gumbo life,
    only to reap regret.

    why have we presupposed that living can wait;
    why can't we tell the one's we love
    that our spirits are brought to life by their radiance
    if tomorrow never came, would we be satisfied with today?




    Submitted on 2015-10-03 09:38:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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