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    dots Submission Name: Guardians of the Mind Stand Updots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/160
    Words: 233
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsGuardians of the Mind Stand Updots
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    Being stripped
    Painful hands of kindness
    Pull away the illusions
    that have been stuck
    in the grip
    of needy clutches

    For a moment
    The mind falls away
    and we see
    we are not it

    So then we are not our thoughts

    Stand up
    Guardians of the mind
    You are the gates.
    Be careful what you let in
    For what you let in
    Will be acted out.

    Why let mind use and abuse you
    You are not meant to be
    Its spiritual playground!
    Get a grip on letting go.

    This is not denial or suppression

    This is acknowledging
    and choosing to always choose Love.

    When you act out
    STOP!
    Turn around in yourself
    and REACH IN
    to God.

    Touch wholeness
    and let brokenness
    fall away

    Negative thinking
    is stinking
    but in the poop of it
    There is gold.

    Dont eat every thought
    that is offered to you.
    Some poison your system
    To death.

    Feast on the loving thoughts
    and be transformed.

    I see a world coming
    It's foundation stone is God
    It's main value is Love
    I see a heart forming
    That takes responsibility
    For its own thoughts and actions
    and attacks the other not
    but REACHES IN for healing.
    I see an abundance
    of joy and compassion and peace manifesting
    I see hope!






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