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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    I was full of emptiness
    Until I let you in
    Filling my void,
    that had been my closest consort
    You immersed me
    in emotion; in love
    The kind of love philosophers dream of
    and great poets write of
    That would surely make Byron blush
    And now,
    Bursting at the seams
    My life is full
    Of you




    Submitted on 2015-10-13 06:24:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      There is many a slip twixt the cup and the lip, so drink deep, drink deep before you sleep, drink deep.
    | Posted on 2015-10-16 00:00:00 | by Torie | [ Reply to This ]


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