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    dots Submission Name: blue-faced baboonerydots
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    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 368/381/226
    Words: 22
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsblue-faced baboonerydots
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    my raving and ranting
    won't change the Truth
    and neither will yours
    it's all a vain diversion
    ●a hirsute negotiation





    Submitted on 2015-10-18 08:21:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This reminds me of the war at the waterhole in the opening of 2001:A Space Odyssey: two groups unwilling to come to an agreement threaten to and ultimately beat each other down to fulfill the "survival of the fittest" mentality that is hard to shake. Except in this case, the "violence" is an unyielding verbal assault that jacks up the volume as it stops up the ears. Sounds like an election.

    Just some thoughts.
    | Posted on 2015-10-27 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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