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    dots Submission Name: Lex Talionis of the Twelve Gaugedots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       Sometimes we just want paint the walls with our thoughts...


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    dotsLex Talionis of the Twelve Gaugedots
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    Relinquishing this, my lament for you
    the few who refrain self-righteous views.
    feinting pleasantries with the bravest deceit;
    emptiness marauding cynics yearn to repeat
    that nostalgic release of poetic quotation
    to belittle fathers before sons---

    Replenishing this, my hunger for new
    thoughts long since past, volumes in queue
    festering precariously at the front of the mind;
    withdrawing into the same old thing in rewind.
    Stitch and hem away, like Rhea Ilia for quid.
    I’ll fire upon thoughts like Hemingway did.




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