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    dots Submission Name: Why I watch cartoonsdots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsWhy I watch cartoonsdots
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    I watch cartoons
    because they don't
    get hurt with guns
    knives or harpoons.

    I watch cartoons
    because the pain
    Is not shown
    Poor or with tycoon.

    I watch cartoons
    because life is precious
    but its depictions
    show death soon.

    I watch cartoons
    because I'm young at heart
    and my big heart
    occupies a bigger room.




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