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    dots Submission Name: Newspeakdots
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    Author: RequiemOfDreams
    ASL Info:    20/M/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 97/140/38
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1905
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    Description:
       This is a poem, believe it or not. Newspeak borrowed from 1984 in fact. Newspeak doesn't have "flow". Newspeak doesn't have room for distinction between words. Newspeak eliminates difference and thought.

    for example
    Newspeak = new language
    old speak = old language
    unquestion = answer
    Unlife = death

    I made these words up trying to keep to similar guidelines used in 1984


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    dotsNewspeakdots
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    Newspeak, the newspeak
    Shows all forms of a word
    Unconfuse me, I don't understand
    Unquestion my question
    Oldspeak, tell unlost it for me
    Newspeak, the lazyspeak
    Newspeak, the onlyspeak
    Unlife to oldspeak
    Life to newspeak
    Unperson to oldspeak
    Person to newspeak

    To be free? Is Oldspeak
    No newspeak word for 'to be free'
    Slavery? Is oldspeak
    Newspeak for slavery is Freedom

    Peace is to be unpeace
    Unpeace is to be at war, in oldspeak
    Person is to exist, in newspeak
    Unpeson is to not, in newspeak

    Person to newspeak
    Unperson to oldspeak




    Submitted on 2004-08-06 02:27:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love 1984, it's my third favourite book in the world. This makes me laugh, to see the comments and see it out of my little paperback copy. I love it... Peace. -rue
    | Posted on 2005-08-21 00:00:00 | by Rue | [ Reply to This ]
      attention, Requiemof Dreams, this information has been unsubmitted by you as of 8-5-04. You will untell the existence of oldspeak, for it never has exited, and never have you. Room 101. immediately!

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    | Posted on 2004-08-06 00:00:00 | by Ratmeat | [ Reply to This ]


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