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    dots Submission Name: Sensationdots
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    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 41/64/76
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 974
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    Description:
       Odd questions


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    dotsSensationdots
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    Why does it feel to me when someone walks in my backyard?

    Do I even have a backyard?

    Does anyone ever rub up against your house?

    Like the rain that's there, that I am not supposed to hear?

    Why do I think somethings going to change; I'm just waiting frozen in fear

    --> hopefully not thinking about you with the devil of sirens




    Submitted on 2015-10-25 17:40:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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