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    dots Submission Name: Why Gives a Damn About Helldots
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    Author: hyproglo
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 180/257/152
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWhy Gives a Damn About Helldots
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    I could hickory dickory your socks off
    Run fantastic motions, forget about that clock
    Leave a little liquid as your new tattoo

    Enthralled in the joy of smiling while your eyes are closed
    I'll have to tell you later about how I winked at you

    How can you stand this ecstacy
    Such a goddess underneath me

    Above
    Behind
    and on the side as well

    We're touching heaven so why give a damn about hell





    Submitted on 2015-10-25 23:43:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Im loving this, whole thing...seriously awesome work...keep doin your thang, Im just eatin it up!!

    Denise
    | Posted on 2015-11-01 00:00:00 | by Forgiven | [ Reply to This ]
      Exactly. Quit the notion. Enjoy that touch. nuff said. you speak in volumes.
    | Posted on 2015-10-30 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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