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    dots Submission Name: An ass out of u and medots
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    Author: Chelebel
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    dotsAn ass out of u and medots
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    Forming the words to create the illusions
    Of love that bends and twists with conclusions.

    But why assume?
    We can not all presume
    what the mind consumes.
    But dwell too much
    and it Becomes a
    wishing well.

    Throw those pennies
    in the water
    Make your wishes
    Let us ponder.

    Collect your thoughts
    Proceed with caution
    Allow the moment
    To yield the notion
    Of hearts defined
    by many Actions.
    Creating cause and effect
    The consequences
    collapsing.


    So, dot those T'z
    And Cross your eyes!











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    ||| Comments |||
      It's a funny thing, we seem to be on the same page,
    the heart is a canister of ink, when the mind is left blank.
    doing what's right really just takes the write friction,
    when dewey points out properly and we can wade through the fiction.

    Fiction is as fiction does,
    so ficticious are the false,
    but fact is in fact in fallable,
    therefore the truth can never fall.

    Indeed it's more likely to autumn.
    I's crossed, T'zzzz dot-id.
    | Posted on 2015-10-31 00:00:00 | by ShyOne | [ Reply to This ]


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