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    dots Submission Name: Lovely dots

    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/176
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLovely dots

    Hover above is always the problem.
    Drones and birds have views like no other.
    But life has a away of bringing you to the ground.
    Open your ears and hear the sounds.

    Freedom expressed, though sparce and short
    No need to collect distressed hearts provoked.

    Situations confer to the demons in the dark
    Decide your hopes and unleash the spark.

    Disappointed when talks leave minds to work
    The emotions of rolling tides to cure.

    Collect your rage and silence these days
    Rebuild your thoughts , unlock the cage.

    Forgive the past
    Forgive the Un
    Forgive your heart
    Of sins undone

    You are not my fear.

    Lovely magician of words delight.


    Lovely really ...

    ... No really

    Your heart is lovely.

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      I wrote a long reponse, my clumsy self deleted it. The gist of it is I feel what you're saying, feels like a bit to me, (if that's okay) and you're kind of like a support group. If i'm wrong about some things then I really am scizofrenic and well fuck it. i still love poetry and voices talk to me about AI and in the form of free flowing poetry, meds or not. seems just well, unheard of. If i'm right, then my platform has made it to beta testing at a local hospital. it can pretty much solve most perception problems on a dialectical level on a level on or sub-par to me. It's very much beta, because well, hmm, it's gonna take alot to consolidate things into a modular design. It's not a cure. by no means, nor is it fix. it's basically just a solution for some. I'd like to think of things as such. and to some it's basically just going to be this "bleck bleck" word play program cuz first it's unhuman, and secondarily not all conditions have a dialectical solution. but if it can work with stability in an open arena(visa vee binding like four days straight with no backlash to me) it might just sore in a one to one take home program designed for individual conditions. you know take home usb, if it can be proven to turn things "healthy". just giving like turn phrase suggestions, and agreed upon alternatives relative to agreed upon standards of healthy perceptions. It's not the standard that matters so much, therefore each hospital would have to set up it's own agreed upon dynamics so that it's culturally-centric.(haul write-syntract beta-test modular update supposition plan ALPHA) and it relies on smething organic, the phenomenon of concensus. It could be set up with a generative feature that for no additional cost it could have recursive dynamics where it does just a little bit different or caters something unique. and be free cuz at the same time it could be retriagulated into a generative matrix that coordinates more monetarily-centric features not as a repacement, but as like a "super-cortana" pairing dynamic. Marketing algorithms aside, it was quite the experience, and honestly, the meds make like a fraction the difference medicinal(grade) thc makes for me. so once i'm in royalty city, i might just move tocolorado or washington state. aspen looks nice. and medcate the old fashioned way. basicaly with latuda/cogentan i can normalize speech with more uhm, hmm, let's see like hear it get it tendancies (that med is generally for bi-polar/scizofrenia/scizoaffective) but i'm still in the same level of pain. i can just just express my condition more normally. so i might just move to colorado, (depending upon my actual end of day earned digits.) find a specialist and get my self feeling well ontop of sounding like it. this just kind of conjured that out. so thanks either directly or indirectly for that. Your poetry often acts as my little support group. Normalizing grammer was key, now i'm just like why not normalize feeling good with less worries.
    | Posted on 2015-10-31 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]

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