Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Losing It dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: annie0888
    ASL Info:    49/f/LA
    Elite Ratio:    4.76 - 327/382/121
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 425
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 808



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsLosing It dots
    -------------------------------------------


    Losing It

    Imagine yourself gone.
    Sometime when you've had it
    up to the fluffy white top of your patient head
    when your children won't stop name-calling
    and dropping bombs
    when you can't find fIfty or even ten
    let alone one
    man or woman who remembers mercy
    who still knows how to love
    let there be
    no more.

    Let every tree and weed and flower crash
    with a cosmic commotion
    let dry land sink into the oceans
    let the oceans circle the drain
    let every living creature walk or swim or fly
    into that swirling oblivion
    let the light in every human eye flicker out
    pull a blanket of darkness over your head
    close your eyes
    and rest.




    Submitted on 2015-11-01 01:19:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      or let my version of the earth succumb
    to the moment when dreams melt, become
    the emptiness that each soul craves
    as the universe recoils from the shock, we wake
    | Posted on 2015-11-05 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      Given the state of affairs in the world these days, this poem struck a chord with me. Every so often, I think...what would God do? I saw a movie many years ago where the antagonist said that the only way to solve an unsolvable problem is to smash it and start over again. Maybe God feels the same way?

    Thank you for sharing!

    Kelly
    | Posted on 2015-11-01 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    200807

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    no words for how graceful you are in this moment written by Daniel Barlow
    Silent Screams In Silent Dreams written by poetotoe
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (4) written by endlessgame23
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    My Four Seasons written by faideddarkness
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    Records I written by Raphael
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    The Unicorn written by BlazeFlamme
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    untitled written by ShyOne
    Comme un lion en avril written by Outlaw
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    i've missed written by mysalvation
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Shi written by ShyOne
    a safe place written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    The Old Mill written by Wolfwatching
    mimicry written by expiring_touch
    Etiquette written by saartha
    the testing of hypotheses written by Daniel Barlow
    an unashamed poverty written by Daniel Barlow
    Journey written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (6) written by endlessgame23
    Formal Jen written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry