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    dots Submission Name: True know it all's dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/174
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I have noticed that there is always somebody who is right. When life throws its fastballs and curve balls, if you express it, there is always somebody who has nailed it dead on. Got it right. Had the foresight to predict and to actually help you make the right decision. OPEN your ears and listen to these people. They are our prophets. They are our guides.


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    dotsTrue know it all's dots
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    They are our prophets and our guides

    Speaking through the masses and guise.

    Of the old ways to brand the right things to do,

    Moving through this life with promises anew.

    They are our prophets look in their eyes.

    Hear their hearts and see the prize.

    Listen closely and don't deny

    Our angels are alive.




    They are our prophets and our guides.

    The spirits speak through these means.

    Know that hope and love survives, know that

    Light always collides, with the darkness in the skies.



    Gave birth to stars!



















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