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    dots Submission Name: Bipolardots
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    Author: Raistlin Sith
    ASL Info:    22/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 106/182/66
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       A mix of myself and how it feels to have bipolar disorder.


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    dotsBipolardots
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    I find myself stumbling,
    blind to the obstacles in front of me.
    I crash into them one after the other,
    knowing I'd see them if I would just open my eyes.
    Despite every scrape and every bruise
    I squeeze my eyelids tighter still,
    not ready to see, not ready to know
    how far from my dreams I've wandered.
    Like each wave rushing to the shore
    I fall and break and fade away.
    Almost, but never quite, destroyed,
    I become the sea once more.




    Submitted on 2015-11-03 07:39:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like the comparison you used with the sea. It is good to be open about how our challenges expose themselves in our lives. I'm not sure that we all don't feel the same way, blind to each new obstacle, tossed different ways by our circumstances. There are ways to find roots despite the rising giants on every side of our emotions, adopted principles and coping mechanisms that enable us strength in every storm. I pray that hope will guide you to that foundation. I was diagnosed with a borderline personality disorder, which is very related to being bipolar regarding symptoms. However, I sincerely believe there is much more to life and living than a diagnoses. God bless you, thank you for sharing.
    | Posted on 2015-11-04 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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