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    dots Submission Name: Red Wine Vinegar (Call Me)dots
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    Author: lebeauvide
    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 75/295/165
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 378
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    dotsRed Wine Vinegar (Call Me)dots
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    Call me bitter
    Call me
    sour grapes
    Call me red wine vinegar
    Call me honey,
    and tell me there are better ways to catch flies

    Call me loved
    Call me
    "good enough"
    Call me Bacardi 151
    Call me "good enough to stick your dick in
    but not good enough to take home"

    Call me at midnight
    Call me
    at 2 AM, with Jack Daniels on your breath
    Call me "back up plan"
    Call me, "SLUT,
    you'd better fucking pick up the phone"

    Call me bitch
    Call me
    "you fucking whore"
    Call me red wine vinegar,
    bleeding on the bed sheets
    while you wash off the stains in the shower

    Call me angry
    Call me
    unbridled rage
    Call me red wine vinegar
    shouting your name
    and calling you what you are:

    Rapist.




    Submitted on 2015-11-07 20:02:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I am also red whine vinegar. Or maybe cayenne. Yes, and so are you. This is bursting with bite. I love that you are asserting power with your words. There is a strength here beneath the pain.

    Nice work.
    | Posted on 2015-11-21 00:00:00 | by JanePlane | [ Reply to This ]
      This is powerful, immediate, and real. Really good job here.
    | Posted on 2015-11-10 00:00:00 | by ganymede | [ Reply to This ]


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