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    Author: hyproglo
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    Getting lost
    in that slow, mournful cry of a blazing guitar
    or the silence of when you've lost your tongue

    Losing yourself in the silence that comes after you've said more than you should

    "It's only dark for a short time my love...the sun may not be seen, but it still shines"

    What's ever been lost standing on a beach
    Listening to the ocean

    Does loss come from caring too much or not enough?

    There is no hidden hand
    No half empty or half filled glass

    White noise and the silence of a breeze in the trees

    Forbidden moments and everything one perceives

    Must be.

    Is there no better avenue in which your time can be spent
    Instead if trying to extinguish what will always exist

    Enjoy the scenery along the ride
    Keep the background noise at bay

    Ask any question, the answers never change





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