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    dots Submission Name: Dearest Rue Accrue,dots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 288/229/264
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 752
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    Description:
       I'm asking for regret, but without incentive to, there is none.


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    dotsDearest Rue Accrue,dots
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    Send me something to kneel for

    I haven't what to repent

    Through the mail; a letter, an essay if you will
    My eyes strain at even the faintest of intimations

    My ears tear wide at the crooning of your chants

    In my head, your memory never ages,
    although bits disperse

    Leading a sudden loom, my mind led aloof
    The past, I urge you to abet
    So that I may remind you, on the truest note, that

    I never meant to forget.

    These places I've been have me bed-ridden, felt as dross

    A day sooner unto welcoming death

    Never having plead God forgive impropriety
    Of others, or of me

    Forgive the transgression pulled through; so daft a plight
    I digress to ever having prayed so long a night

    In this silence, I find
    He listens well, for however many minutes at a time,

    but if anything is to be said...
    Time is known not to be as kind.




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