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    dots Submission Name: Coveteddots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsCoveteddots
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    Once
    remote;
    secluded,
    an inaccessible space
    to most.
    Unknown and unappreciated.
    Always there.
    Always beautiful, beyond words.
    Waiting,
    for someone to find you,
    to allow your beauty to be discovered.
    Finally, finding you,
    in awe of your splendor,
    keeping you to myself.
    knowing what upheaval brought you to me.
    Imagining what power created you.
    Selfish.
    A part of me wanting the world to know this wonder;
    a part of me wanting you for my own.
    Unwilling to share your beauty.
    Coveted.




    Submitted on 2015-11-15 07:25:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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