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    dots Submission Name: Unspoken words dots
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    Author: Apoetwcloudenvy
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    Been fighting these word for a minute, it was just like yesterday where you and I was on one accord. Now we are distance individuals with no harmony or no commitment. Only passing through time in a standing position waiting to be liberated by another individual care. Still it is sad, since I thought the opposite would have occur yet this is what happens when the truth spills into reality. Especially a reality where participates are neither capable or willing to swallow the truth . 




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